A good analysis that has covered plenty and addressed most of the issues identified during the original presentation.
Well done for adding in more text and images to support what you spoke about during the showing. You make smart observations and back them up with good explanations in almost all places. Some areas could do with more description - what do the sounds sound like and what do they communicate to the audience? What emotions and feelings does the lighting suggest, and so on... You could probably do a little more for most sections in this way.
A good analysis that has covered plenty and addressed most of the issues identified during the original presentation.
ReplyDeleteWell done for adding in more text and images to support what you spoke about during the showing. You make smart observations and back them up with good explanations in almost all places. Some areas could do with more description - what do the sounds sound like and what do they communicate to the audience? What emotions and feelings does the lighting suggest, and so on... You could probably do a little more for most sections in this way.
Overall, good job
B