Very good - you've covered all the essentails, and some in good detail. A nic erange of examples. To push it up to an A you need to:
Use more than 1 e.g. for each point (ideally 3) Don't copy & paste (the establishing shot bit is I think? if so, re-word it) Explain each e.g. Why is it used here and in what way?
At the end, summarise by listing the key conventions you've noted in these films.
Very good - you've covered all the essentails, and some in good detail. A nic erange of examples. To push it up to an A you need to:
ReplyDeleteUse more than 1 e.g. for each point (ideally 3)
Don't copy & paste (the establishing shot bit is I think? if so, re-word it)
Explain each e.g. Why is it used here and in what way?
At the end, summarise by listing the key conventions you've noted in these films.
Good job
B