This our pitch where we presented our ideas for a film opening to the class.
We had developed two ideas for our film opening. The feedback we got was good and we hope to take all feedback on board. The first idea was a bank heist and the second idea was a man running from criminals whilst his partner is being interrogated. The feedback for the first idea was that the idea needed to be developed further. The feedback we got for the second idea was that it would be hard to cram the action into two minuets however when we interviewed our target audience they preferred an action packed film opening rather one that gradually builds.
The changes we are going to make are:
- We are not going to prolong the interrogation scene
- Make more jump cuts
- Develop who the characters are and the cast
This write up could be a little more in-depth but it does the essentials - B-
ReplyDeleteMore importantly, there's loads of work not here:
All your secondary TA work
TA Interviews
TA member profile
Get them done v soon as not to lost time management marks & postpone filming